Pierce111
Member
- Joined
- Nov 27, 2012
- Member Type
- Other
- Native Language
- Polish
- Home Country
- Poland
- Current Location
- Poland
Can you check for me given below business letter? I hope I haven't made many mistakes.
Dear Sir o Madame,
We would like to interest you in establishing trade cooperation with our company – XXXX Ltd. We are Polish largest producer and distributor (supplier?) of bolts, screws and other joining components with 28 years of business running experience. With our staff amounting (mounting, reaching?) 480 employees, big production plant and five abroad, commercial branches we are serious and trustworthy partner for any kind of business cooperation.
What we can offer you is:
To get more on our company we invite you to visit our website: xxxxxx.com . Please take a look at our offer, range of business activity, our achievements.
If you have any questions please feel free to contact me at my email or by phone.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
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Dear Sir o Madame,
We would like to interest you in establishing trade cooperation with our company – XXXX Ltd. We are Polish largest producer and distributor (supplier?) of bolts, screws and other joining components with 28 years of business running experience. With our staff amounting (mounting, reaching?) 480 employees, big production plant and five abroad, commercial branches we are serious and trustworthy partner for any kind of business cooperation.
What we can offer you is:
- very wide assortment of products counting over 25 000 positions, ranging from screws and bolts, through building connectors, to construction chemicals;
- high quality goods;
- products made according to clients’ design concept;
- commercial support connected with commodities (technical information, approvals, certificates of origin);
- stable and reliable partnership conditions.
To get more on our company we invite you to visit our website: xxxxxx.com . Please take a look at our offer, range of business activity, our achievements.
If you have any questions please feel free to contact me at my email or by phone.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
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