[Application] Would you help me with my Copenhagen Business School Motivation essay?

[mary_93]

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[emsr2d2]

Good day!

I am writing my motivation essay for a CBS programme. However, I'm not a native English speaker and I'm a little concerned about my grammar.

Any corrections or advice would be highly appreciated! :-o

These are some of the things the essay should include:

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[STRIKE]Btw[/STRIKE] By the way, this is my first time posting so I'm sorry if I made any mistakes.

I don't have time to deal with your long letter at the moment. However, please look at my corrections above, in red. Remember that you must always capitalise the word "I" and all proper nouns (English, Italy, Shakespeare, Microsoft etc).