Bassim
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- Mar 1, 2008
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- Bosnian
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- Bosnia Herzegovina
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- Sweden
I have tried to use "loom" in my sentences. Would you please correct my mistakes?
1. As John reached the ridge, the sparkling sea loomed in front of him; its bright light hurt his eyes.
2. We walked to the end of the road, and suddenly, a dazzling white mansion loomed in front of us.
3. The driver stopped the bus, and we saw the city looming before us with its myriad of lights and rivers of traffic moving in all directions.
1. As John reached the ridge, the sparkling sea loomed in front of him; its bright light hurt his eyes.
2. We walked to the end of the road, and suddenly, a dazzling white mansion loomed in front of us.
3. The driver stopped the bus, and we saw the city looming before us with its myriad of lights and rivers of traffic moving in all directions.