toanhntm
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This is my sixth attempt at writing in English. Please correct any mistakes that you find.
Amanda often uses internet to chat with her friends. She often chat with a person whose nickname is Tallhandsome30. She likes chatting with him because he is smart and fun. They have the same interest. They share about each other, but Amanda has never seen his face. She extremely wants to meet him, but she is shy.
One day, she gets an email. That email belongs Tallhandsome30. Amanda feels curious. She asks herself (that) what he writes. Amanda finally opens it. Tallhandsome30 introduces his real name is mike and asks Amanda if she would like to meet him on Friday. Amanda is excited about their date. She agrees and choose a favorite restaurant. They will first meet at the fountain in front of the restaurant.
Amanda puts on a black dress, a black hat and blond shoes. She is nervous. When Amanda arrives, she sees a man who stands by the fountain, but she can not see his face. He Amanda walks toward the man and says “Mike”. He turns around. Amanda can see his face. She is surprised.
“Amanda Jones” Mike exclaims. He realizes that he knows her. Amanda Jones and Mike Miller dated in high school. They laugh aloud and hug. Sometimes you can find old love too!
A blind date
Amanda often uses internet to chat with her friends. She often chat with a person whose nickname is Tallhandsome30. She likes chatting with him because he is smart and fun. They have the same interest. They share about each other, but Amanda has never seen his face. She extremely wants to meet him, but she is shy.
One day, she gets an email. That email belongs Tallhandsome30. Amanda feels curious. She asks herself (that) what he writes. Amanda finally opens it. Tallhandsome30 introduces his real name is mike and asks Amanda if she would like to meet him on Friday. Amanda is excited about their date. She agrees and choose a favorite restaurant. They will first meet at the fountain in front of the restaurant.
Amanda puts on a black dress, a black hat and blond shoes. She is nervous. When Amanda arrives, she sees a man who stands by the fountain, but she can not see his face. He Amanda walks toward the man and says “Mike”. He turns around. Amanda can see his face. She is surprised.
“Amanda Jones” Mike exclaims. He realizes that he knows her. Amanda Jones and Mike Miller dated in high school. They laugh aloud and hug. Sometimes you can find old love too!