A Thai Movie: Bad Genius

[Gaya87]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long Summary
Lynn is a straight-A student who makes a quick buck by selling exam answers to other students. One day, her friends Grace and Pat propose a million-baht idea: to help students cheat on a standardized test used for the world’s leading university applications. The test is scheduled to take place on the same date and time at locations all over the world. How Lynn is going assist them in this challenging business project?

Short Summary
A group of high-school students comes up with all sorts of ways to cheat in their tests. The students are led by Lynn, a straight-As student who makes money by cheating on the tests for her classmates.

 

[Tarheel]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long Summary
Lynn is a straight-A student who makes a quick buck by selling exam answers to other students. One day, her friends Grace and Pat propose a million-baht idea: to help students cheat on a standardized test used for the world’s leading university applications. The test is scheduled to take place on the same date and time at locations all over the world. How is Lynn is going assist them in this challenging business project?

Short Summary
A group of high-school students comes up with all sorts of ways to cheat on their tests. The students are led by Lynn, a straight-A student who makes money by cheating on the tests for her classmates.

 

[Gaya87]

Hi Sir, thank you for correcting the above writing. Just a small question refers to the last line.

How is Lynn is going assist them in this challenging business project? Is this line correct? Or it should be

How is Lynn going to assist them in this challenging business project?

 

[emsr2d2]

Please remember not to address users on the forum as "Sir" (or "Madam"). It's far too formal and using "Sir" suggests that you are assuming that people who help you are male.

 

[Tarheel]

Hi Sir, thank you for correcting the above writing. Just a small question refers to the last line.

How is Lynn is going assist them in this challenging business project? Is this line correct? Or it should it be

How is Lynn going to assist them in this challenging business project?

Yes, the original sentence is missing the to, which is needed.