After the complete wipe off of Bang Rajan village

[Gaya87]

Can anyone check my writing please, thanks.

Short Summary
After the complete wipe off of Bang Rajan Village, the survivors are set on another guerilla quest to defeat the Burmese army and defend their land.

Long Summary
Set in the Ayutthaya period, Bang Rajan 2 is an epic tale of a village who stands insurmountable odds and bestows the ultimate sacrifice - their lives, for the freedom of the country. After the complete wipe off of the village of Bang Rajan, the survivors, Yantric Warriors, are highly inspired for another guerilla quest to ambush their enemies and defend their land.

 

[tedmc]

Re: After the..

Can [STRIKE]anyone [/STRIKE] someone check my writing please. Thanks.

Short Summary
After the complete[STRIKE] wipe off[/STRIKE] wipe-out of Bang Rajan Village, the survivors are set on another guerilla [STRIKE]quest[/STRIKE](warfare? assault?) to defeat the Burmese army and defend their land (homeland).

Long Summary
Set in the Ayutthaya period, Bang Rajan 2 is an epic tale of a village [STRIKE]who[/STRIKE] which [STRIKE]stands[/STRIKE] faces insurmountable odds and bestows(?risks/is prepared for) the ultimate sacrifice - their (the villagers') lives, for the freedom of the country. After the complete [STRIKE]wipe off[/STRIKE] wipe-out of the village of Bang Rajan, the survivors, Yantric Warriors, are highly inspired for another guerilla quest to ambush their enemies and defend their land.

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A better title for your thread would be "Synopsis of Story/Movie".

 

[emsr2d2]

Re: After the..

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A better title for your thread would be "Synopsis of Story/Movie".

I disagree, tedmc. We always tell users that their thread titles should include some/all of the words/phrases they are querying and should be specific to the thread. Almost all of Gaya87's threads are synopses of films - the title you suggested would not allow us to differentiate between them.

I have actually already amended the title so that it includes almost the entire first sentence of post #1.

 

[tedmc]

Re: After the..

OK, that is better than "After the..".