[Grammar] After the incident, Kevin was shocked

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Nikitus

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


After the incident, Kevin was shocked. He ran to the kitchen and started to eat anxiously while turned on the TV trying to forget the recent episode he lived.

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No.

He ran to the kitchen and started to eat anxiously, turning on the TV trying to forget the recent episode he had endured.
 
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