After tossing and turning for a several minutes, she managed to fall sleep.

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alpacinou

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Is this correct and natural?

After tossing and turning for a several minutes, she managed to fall sleep. She saw her uncle wandering the corridors of their house like a ghost. She was hovering close to wakefulness, and his image became blurrier, almost fading to black.
 
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