Amanda was a beautiful woman

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Bassim

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Amanda was a beautiful woman, but with a serious flaw in her character: her love for luxuries. She was married three times, and all her marriages had broken down because none of her husbands had been able to finance her expensive lifestyle. In the end, she ended up living in a one-room flat with cheap furniture, eking out her existence on a small pension.
 
It's OK for me, but how about with one serious flaw instead of but with a serious flaw?
 
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