An Indonesian Movie: The Rafathar

[Gaya87]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
Jonny Gold and Popo Palupi are professional robbers. They got a job to kidnap a baby named Rafathar, a baby adopted by a wealthy family. It turns out the baby they kidnapped has telekinetic power that is able to control the metal. Hilarious incidents took place in the kidnapping process, until finally the presence of Rafathar has its own meaning to Jonny and Popo. Their journey is slowly beginning to open up a huge conspiracy and the supernatural power of Rafathar.

Short summary
Professional robbers Jonny Gold and his coworker Popo Palupi are entrusted with the task of kidnapping a baby named 'Rafathar' which happens to possess super telekinetic powers that can control metal.

 

[tedmc]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
Jonny Gold and Popo Palupi are professional robbers. They [STRIKE]got[/STRIKE] get (since you started with the present tense) a job to kidnap a baby named Rafathar, a baby adopted by a wealthy family. It turns out the baby they kidnapped has telekinetic power that is able to control[STRIKE] the[/STRIKE] metal. Hilarious incidents [STRIKE]took[/STRIKE] take place in the kidnapping process, until finally the presence of Rafathar has its own meaning to Jonny and Popo. Their journey is slowly beginning to open up a huge conspiracy and the supernatural power of Rafathar.

Short summary
Professional robbers Jonny Gold and his coworker Popo Palupi are entrusted with the task of kidnapping a baby named Rafathar [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] who happens to possess super telekinetic powers that can control metal.

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