touchstone
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- Oct 26, 2016
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
(Two boys are on the phone)
Jack: Hello, is Mike in?
Mike: Speaking.
Jack: Mike, the school sports meet is coming tomorrow. Let’s go together.
Mike: OK. What shall we take?
Jack: We’ll take our sports clothes and sports shoes
....
(from an English textbook in China)
I don’t think this dialogue is natural.
1. Usually, the person who answers a phone call speaks first. But this one does follow the routine.
2. Jack invites Mike to go to school together tomorrow. I think he should say ‘Let’s go to school together tomorrow.’ People usually say ‘Let’s go together’ when they start to do something.
3. ‘What shall we take?’ is ambiguous. People will misunderstand it as ‘what sports shall we choose.’ Mike should say ‘What should we take with us’.
What do you think of my ideas?
Thanks.
Jack: Hello, is Mike in?
Mike: Speaking.
Jack: Mike, the school sports meet is coming tomorrow. Let’s go together.
Mike: OK. What shall we take?
Jack: We’ll take our sports clothes and sports shoes
....
(from an English textbook in China)
I don’t think this dialogue is natural.
1. Usually, the person who answers a phone call speaks first. But this one does follow the routine.
2. Jack invites Mike to go to school together tomorrow. I think he should say ‘Let’s go to school together tomorrow.’ People usually say ‘Let’s go together’ when they start to do something.
3. ‘What shall we take?’ is ambiguous. People will misunderstand it as ‘what sports shall we choose.’ Mike should say ‘What should we take with us’.
What do you think of my ideas?
Thanks.
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