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Gaya87

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Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

It’s basically one of the episodic summaries.

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John is found in Tomas’ lair covered in blood and unable to remember what has happened or how he got there. He discovers that Tomas’ lair is actually a hidden room within his own apartment. A call comes from Henry – Justin has been murdered by Tomas. John goes to the murder scene and realizes that he is indeed Tassan’s son Toby. Based on Justin’s death will John be able to find out who is Tomas?

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John awakens in Tomas’ lair, covered in blood, with no memory of what has happened or how he got there. He discovers that Tomas’ lair is actually a hidden room within his own apartment.



 

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Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

It’s basically one of the episodic summaries.

Long summary
John is found in Tomas’
s lair, covered in blood and unable to remember what has happened or how he got there. He discovers that Tomas’s lair is actually a hidden room within his own apartment. A call comes from Henry – Justin has been murdered by Tomas. John goes to the murder scene and realizes that he is indeed Tassan’s son Toby. Based on Justin’s death, will John be able to find out who [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] Tomas is?

Short summary
John awakens in Tomas’ lair, covered in blood, with no memory of what has happened or how he got there. He discovers that Tomas’ lair is actually a hidden room within his own apartment.



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