Are the words in bold correctly used?

[Tan Elaine]

If only David Marshall had continued being the Prime Minister of Singapore, the country will have been far much more different today. The interview below clearly shows how David Marshall is not a materialistic man but at the same time one who expects a dignified standard of living and who emphasizes education more than money. David Marshall will also not have built in any elitist system unlike Lee Kuan Yew. In an earlier part of this interview David Marshall talked about how we walked around Singapore on night to see the conditions of the suffering and count the numbers sleeping on the street.

Are the words in bold correctly used? David Marshall passed away many years ago.

Thanks.

 

[billmcd]

If only David Marshall had continued [STRIKE]being[/STRIKE]as the Prime Minister of Singapore, the country [STRIKE]will [/STRIKE]would be[STRIKE]have been [/STRIKE][STRIKE]far[/STRIKE] much [STRIKE]more[/STRIKE] different today. The interview below clearly shows how David Marshall [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] was not a materialistic man but, at the same time, one who expected a dignified standard of living and who emphasized education more than he did money. David Marshall [STRIKE]will[/STRIKE]would also not have built in any elitist system, unlike Lee Kuan Yew. In an earlier part of this interview David Marshall talked about how we walked around Singapore one night to see the conditions of the suffering and to count the numbers sleeping on the street.

Are the words in bold correctly used? David Marshall passed away many years ago.

Thanks.

A few suggestions.

 

[Tan Elaine]

Many thanks, Billmcd, for the corrections.