[Grammar] Calm down Jake. I will not show this video to a judge

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Nikitus

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Hello

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Calm down Jake. I will not show this video to a judge. But considering your bad attitude, I need show this video to Mark, who will know what kind of friend you are."

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Raymott

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"I need to show ..." I'd also put a comma before Jake.
 

Tdol

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I'd go for something like in light of rather than considering.
 
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