kmodi
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Ok, I am writing a poem for my honors english class. my teacher told me i need to play with the words/change the words on line 2 and 4. and i need to add dashes (-)/ split up the lines.. can someone help me?? Well, here is my poem.
i dont have a title so...
TITLE
keep your head up
even when you're down
even when you feel like,
your world is upside down
I know you are hurting
because I feel your pain
but this is what makes us,
All the same
Don't take your life,
or self harm
because someone out there,
is in Love with Your charm
No one's out to get you
no one's in your way
but remember
we are all
sort of the Same
please help!
i dont have a title so...
TITLE
keep your head up
even when you're down
even when you feel like,
your world is upside down
I know you are hurting
because I feel your pain
but this is what makes us,
All the same
Don't take your life,
or self harm
because someone out there,
is in Love with Your charm
No one's out to get you
no one's in your way
but remember
we are all
sort of the Same
please help!