Change of Address

[MAJSH]

Mr. Gavin is currently employed by our company as developer since 2023.
He is presently residing at staff accommodation at the address mentioned below, which is being taken on leased by our company.
Therefore, we request that please update the address on his ID card as per the current residential address.

Would you please tell me if the sentences above are worded correctly.

 

[Barque]

Mr. Gavin is currently employed by our company as developer since 2023.

Mr. Gavin is currently employed by our company as a developer since 2023.
Mr. Gavin has been is currently employed by our company as a developer since [month] 2023.

If he'd joined the company in 2021, you could say "since 2021" but you can't say "since 2023" because it's still 2023. If you're going to use "since" with "2023", you need to be more specific and provide the date or at least the month.
Is Gavin the person's first name? If you're using "Mr." it needs to be followed by both first and last names or the last name. "Mr." followed by just the first name is wrong.

He is presently residing at staff accommodation at the address mentioned below, which is being taken on leased by our company.

He is presently residing at staff accommodation at the address mentioned below, which has been is being taken on lease leased by our company.
He is presently residing at staff accommodation at the address mentioned below, which has been is being taken on leased by our company.

You don't really need the words after the comma unless they're important for some reason. If they aren't, delete them and replace the comma with a full stop.

Therefore, we request that please update the address on his ID card as per the current residential address.

Therefore, w We request that please update the address on his ID card be updated to show as per his the current residential address.
Could you please update the address on his ID card to the one below?
Could you please have the address on his ID card changed to the one below?

Would you please tell me if the sentences above are worded correctly.

This is a question and needs a question mark, not a full stop.

 

[tedmc]

Mr. Gavin is has been employed by our company as a developer (What type of developer? A developer can mean many things) since (date/month) 2023.
He is presently residing lives at staff accommodation at the address mentioned below, which is being taken on leased by our company.
Therefore, we request that Please update the address on his ID card as per the current residential address.

 

[emsr2d2]

Do you really need to given them all the information about his employment history and who leases the house/apartment? The fact that you're writing this letter/email suggests that you are in a position to request changes to an employee's ID card so it seems unnecessary to make the message any longer than this:

Please update the address on Mr [surname or first name and surname]'s ID card to:
[full address]