Fredoon
Member
- Joined
- Jan 13, 2022
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Denmark
- Current Location
- Switzerland
Hello,
I have just written this short essay about "the best way to live". Could you please take a look at it and correct my mistakes?
Personally, I would rather live in a place in the university's neighborhood though it is old or noisy.
It helps me to save a great deal of time. As a student, I have a tight schedule, so I must manage my time efficiently. If I lived close to the university, I could not only keep myself away from wasting time commuting and stalling in traffic jams but also do mind-refreshing activities like hiking and jogging.
I have just written this short essay about "the best way to live". Could you please take a look at it and correct my mistakes?
Personally, I would rather live in a place in the university's neighborhood though it is old or noisy.
It helps me to save a great deal of time. As a student, I have a tight schedule, so I must manage my time efficiently. If I lived close to the university, I could not only keep myself away from wasting time commuting and stalling in traffic jams but also do mind-refreshing activities like hiking and jogging.