veneziadrive
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I'm going to do a language exam, and this is another writing attempt of mine. Would you please help correct my mistakes and let me know how I should improve?
Thank you.
Composition about children changed
There will always be children and there had always been children for centuries, but let’s just take a look how everything has changed and different from it used to be.
We have the information about the latest generations from our parents and if we are lucky from our grandparents. Everybody knows how grandparents can be amazed by seeing their grandchildren behaving. In my opinion nowadays children’s behavior got extremely different. I believe socializing and hobbies have changed a lot because of the world we live today – with our smart phones, smart TVs, iPads and so on. Therefore, children have a hard time to make friends, because instead of going out to play in the garden they play online games where they fight and kill other creatures, sometimes people as well.
Children used to read books and play with building blocks or dolls, but they don’t do these things any more. The sad thing about this, that they see using electronic devices from us – adults.
Children’s attitudes have changed a lot too. They used to respect teachers and adults, but it’s different now. Maybe because life is different too. Just like fashion. Long ago students had to wear uniforms in school, so everybody could be the same. Poor children wore the same as richer ones. I don’t think that it was a bad thing, however when I was a child, I wouldn’t want to wear one of those. Nowadays children think fashion is very important. They want their parents to buy them the latest fashion items, and they are afraid of being the least fashionable student in the class as well.
The only thing we can do as parents is to raise our children as how we think is the best for them.
Thank you.
Composition about children changed
There will always be children and there had always been children for centuries, but let’s just take a look how everything has changed and different from it used to be.
We have the information about the latest generations from our parents and if we are lucky from our grandparents. Everybody knows how grandparents can be amazed by seeing their grandchildren behaving. In my opinion nowadays children’s behavior got extremely different. I believe socializing and hobbies have changed a lot because of the world we live today – with our smart phones, smart TVs, iPads and so on. Therefore, children have a hard time to make friends, because instead of going out to play in the garden they play online games where they fight and kill other creatures, sometimes people as well.
Children used to read books and play with building blocks or dolls, but they don’t do these things any more. The sad thing about this, that they see using electronic devices from us – adults.
Children’s attitudes have changed a lot too. They used to respect teachers and adults, but it’s different now. Maybe because life is different too. Just like fashion. Long ago students had to wear uniforms in school, so everybody could be the same. Poor children wore the same as richer ones. I don’t think that it was a bad thing, however when I was a child, I wouldn’t want to wear one of those. Nowadays children think fashion is very important. They want their parents to buy them the latest fashion items, and they are afraid of being the least fashionable student in the class as well.
The only thing we can do as parents is to raise our children as how we think is the best for them.