Crashed down below

[99bottles]

I want to describe the moment when someone falling off the edge of a building reaches the ground.

'His/her body crashed down below.'

Is this good?

 

[emsr2d2]

99bottles, I am certain that you have been on the forum long enough to know that we don't start questions with "How to". Please edit your post and construct the question correctly.

 

[Rover_KE]

Other members, please refrain from answering until that has been done.

 

[99bottles]

99bottles, I am certain that you have been on the forum long enough to know that we don't start questions with "How to". Please edit your post and construct the question correctly.

I've been here long, but I don't visit often. Give me a break.

Just edited it. May I now get some help?

 

[emsr2d2]

You've edited it but there's now another error. Look carefully at what you've written and check the closing punctuation mark.

 

[99bottles]

You've edited it but there's now another error. Look carefully at what you've written and check the closing punctuation mark.

Edited again. Please help me this time so that I can make some progress.

 

[emsr2d2]

His/Her body hits the ground.

 

[Tdol]

Crashed into the ground.

 

[emsr2d2]

... crashed to the ground.