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hhtt21

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It would probably be easier to understand your sentences if they were shorter and simpler. As it is, they are rather confusing.
They would be so because of grammatical or incorrect-word mistakes otherwise I think they are enough simple and short. Which ones do you find too long and complex?

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They [STRIKE]would be so[/STRIKE] are like that because of grammatical or [STRIKE]incorrect-word[/STRIKE] vocabulary mistakes. Otherwise, I think they are [STRIKE]enough[/STRIKE] simple and short enough. Which ones do you find too long and complex?

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They would be so because of grammatical or incorrect-word mistakes otherwise I think they are enough simple and short. Which ones do you find too long and complex?

Let's look at those sentences. Perhaps:

That would be because of grammar mistakes or mistakes in word choices.
 

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And:

I think they are simple enough and short enough.

This one ane the previous one are (as I have demonstrated) two separate sentences.

"Which ones do you find too long and complex?" is fine, but it does, I think, miss the point. The point is, of course, achieving clarity.
 
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