Diary - Today, I ordered three items from IKEA.

[Maybo]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

Today, I ordered three items from IKEA. First, it is a block-out curtain. I need that very much because summer's sun rises very early, and the sunlight makes me wake up early. Very annoying! The second one is a bed tray. Sometimes, I don't want to get off my bed while eating, so that item is convenient for me. The last item is a package of scented dry flowers. IKEA claims that it has a smell of Scandinavian woods. I'm curious what it would smell like.

 

[emsr2d2]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

Today, I ordered three items from IKEA.

The first no comma here it is a black-out curtain. I really need that very much because the summer's summer sun rises very early no comma here and the sunlight makes me wake wakes me up. early. Very annoying!

The second one is a bed tray. Sometimes, I just don't want to get off my bed/get out of bed while eating, to eat! so that item is convenient for me.

The last item is a package of scented dry flowers. IKEA claims that it they has a smell of Scandinavian woods and I'm curious to know what it would that smells like.

 

[tedmc]

The sun wakes you up because it penetrates through your curtain. It wouldn't if you have a blackout curtain.

 

[Tarheel]

@Maybo Is dawn so loud that it makes you get out of bed?
Do you walk into the bathroom and shake the cobwebs out of your head?

 

[Maybo]

@Maybo Is dawn so loud that it makes you get out of bed?
Do you walk into the bathroom and shake the cobwebs out of your head?

The light is too bright. I want to sleep more.

 

[Tarheel]

The light is too bright. I want to sleep more.

I get that, but do you like my rhyme?