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Is "factors" a right word in the following sentence?

When Bob asks her mother to buy him a toy, she always thinks of different factors to decide whether she should buy it or not. For example, their budget.
 
Is "factors" a right word in the following sentence?

When Bob asks [STRIKE]her[/STRIKE] his mother to buy him a toy, she always [STRIKE]thinks of[/STRIKE] considers different factors in order to decide whether she should buy it or not. For example, their budget.

"Factors" is OK but please note my other corrections.
 
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