Does my phrase sound natural "This book has been an eye-opener to me..."?

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Zoli

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This book has been an eye-opener to me and caused me to develop an even deeper appreciation for computer programming.
 

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Can I also add "an even deeper appreciation for computer programming than I had before." ?
 

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Than I had before is unnecessary- the logic of the sentence makes it superfluous.
 

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PS The original sentence is fine, though I would say made me develop.
 

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I would say 'an eye-opener FOR me', rather than 'TO me'. 'To' strikes me as at least unnatural, if not incorrect.
 

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"Eye openers" are usually real. "That was a real eye opener for me."
 
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I think it's supposed to be are usually real..
 

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Yes. "Are usually real."
 
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