[General] Does this sentence sound natural to native speakers?

[gookenhaim]

[FONT=&quot]Hello, I am writing a job essay for my job application questions.


"Your firm is known for its ability to achieve high levels of customer satisfaction."
is what I think isn't really good.
Which part makes it unnatural to you as a native speaker? Thanks[/FONT]

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello.

I am writing an [STRIKE]job[/STRIKE] essay for my job application questions.

"Your firm is known for its [STRIKE]ability to achieve[/STRIKE] high levels of customer satisfaction (no full stop here)" is [STRIKE]what[/STRIKE] a sentence [STRIKE]I think isn't really good[/STRIKE] I'm not happy with.

[STRIKE]Which part makes it unnatural to you as a native speaker?[/STRIKE] Does it sound unnatural?

[STRIKE]Thanks.[/STRIKE] Unnecessary. Thank us after we help you, by clicking on the "Thank" button.

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