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HOTEL BY ARTHUR HAILEY
As he did most mornings, Curtis O'Keefe showered first and prayed afterward. The procedure was typically efficient since he came clean to God and also dried off thoroughly in a towel robe during the twenty minutes or so he was on his knees.
I can't understand what is going on here. I wish a comma were after robe.
So, was he drying off during twenty minutes? Sounds strange, but frankly speaking without this whole sentence looks like a clumsy heap of scrapы of phrases.
The procedure was typically efficient since he came clean to God and also dried off thoroughly in a towel robe during the twenty minutes or so. He was on his knees.
Garbage.
The procedure was typically efficient since he came clean to God and also dried off thoroughly in a towel robe. During the twenty minutes or so he was on his knees.
This sounds more logical. But anyway, it is not understandable. Something strange is going on.
Could you help me understand this. Could you help me understand what took 20 minutes? Shower and praying? Or just praying? Or just drying up?
And why such a slippery construction? Do you like such style?
As he did most mornings, Curtis O'Keefe showered first and prayed afterward. The procedure was typically efficient since he came clean to God and also dried off thoroughly in a towel robe during the twenty minutes or so he was on his knees.
I can't understand what is going on here. I wish a comma were after robe.
So, was he drying off during twenty minutes? Sounds strange, but frankly speaking without this whole sentence looks like a clumsy heap of scrapы of phrases.
The procedure was typically efficient since he came clean to God and also dried off thoroughly in a towel robe during the twenty minutes or so. He was on his knees.
Garbage.
The procedure was typically efficient since he came clean to God and also dried off thoroughly in a towel robe. During the twenty minutes or so he was on his knees.
This sounds more logical. But anyway, it is not understandable. Something strange is going on.
Could you help me understand this. Could you help me understand what took 20 minutes? Shower and praying? Or just praying? Or just drying up?
And why such a slippery construction? Do you like such style?