[Grammar] Email Response to Prospective Employer - Proofing

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Zachary Watson

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Hello everyone,

I am hoping some of you could take a moment to proof read this email response and provide a few suggestions if any. Please and Thanks! :D


I appreciate the opportunity, and I am looking forward to interviewing with **** ****. I will be happy to provide you with a copy of my resume prior to Wednesday as requested. I do have a question. After visiting the careers section available on the company website, I have been unable to locate the position for QC Microbiologist. If possible could you please provide me with the expected job responsibilities and qualifications? I only ask because the position I originally applied for was QA Operations Specialist I.

Very respectfully,
 

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I appreciate the opportunity, and I am looking forward to the interview [STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] with **** ****. I will be happy to provide you with a copy of my resume prior to Wednesday, as requested. I do have a question. After visiting the careers section [STRIKE]available[/STRIKE] on the company website, I have been unable to locate the position for QC Microbiologist. If possible, could you please provide me with the expected job responsibilities and qualifications? I only ask because the position I originally applied for was QA Operations Specialist I.

Very respectfully,

That "l" at the end of your email looks like a typo; if so, delete it.
 
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