Experience unique learning platform powered by powerful computing

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omshrihare

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Hi All ,

Writing this sentence for a banner of website . Could you please suggest if this sentence can be improved to convey the concept in more meaningful and attractive way ( the website is for student , which help in the exam preparation):

"Experience unique learning platform powered by powerful computing, filters the randomness and chaos of big syllabus, and help you align to the right direction.Experience unique learning platform powered by powerful computing, filters the randomness and chaos of big syllabus, and help you align to the right direction"

Thanks for your input !

Pankaj
 

emsr2d2

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Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Is the banner really going to contain the sentence twice?
 
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