good investment/a good way to invest

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Hello, teachers. I'm trying to say that in college, learning subjects that will benefit your future career such as those related to science and technology is a good investment because these subjects will help you get a high-paying job.

I wrote these two versions. Are they idiomatic? Thanks!

1. It is a good investment for students to study disciplines that will benefit their career.
2. Studying science or technology-related subjects seems like a good way to invest in higher education.[FONT=&quot]
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Hello, teachers. I'm trying to say that in college, learning subjects that will benefit your future career such as those related to science and technology is a good investment because these subjects will help you get a [STRIKE]high-paying[/STRIKE] well-paid job.

I wrote [STRIKE]these[/STRIKE] the following two versions. Are they [STRIKE]idiomatic[/STRIKE] grammatically correct? Thanks!

1. It is a good investment for students to study disciplines that will benefit their career.
2. Studying science or technology-related subjects [STRIKE]seems like[/STRIKE] is a good [STRIKE]way to[/STRIKE] investment. [STRIKE]in higher education.
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See above. Studying those subjects isn't an investment in higher education. It's an investment in yourself and your future.
 
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