Grammar checking

[Anitha1977]

Dear sir , . Based on the today conversation with Mr. Bala, we have sent our request for M/s Bush for deputing the service engineer . Please refer the below mail sent by Mr. Kumar

 

[teechar]

we have sent our request for M/s Bush for deputing the service engineer .

What does that mean?

 

[emsr2d2]

Dear Sir, (no full stop here)

Based on [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] our [STRIKE]today[/STRIKE] conversation today with Mr. Bala, we have sent our request for M/s Bush for deputing the service engineer.

Please refer to the [STRIKE]below[/STRIKE] email below, sent by Mr. Kumar.

While we wait for you to explain the underlined part, please look at my corrections above.