angelique_22
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- Joined
- Oct 28, 2014
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Spanish
- Home Country
- United States
- Current Location
- United States
I'm having a hard time rewriting a sentence. I have finished my essay and my teacher gave it back so we could rewrite it and get a better score. so the sentence i need help rewriting is, "I will give you examples of puritans work ethic and compare it with today's society." My english teacher said to reword the sentence without using I, im having a hard time so i was wondering if anyone could help! Thanks!