[General] His stories are encouraging ang inspiring.

[Silverobama]

Someone sent me a video about a man who was originally poorly educated but he worked so hard that his English is amazing. I told this friend who sent me the video that I know the man because I watched his previous videos. I said "His stories are encouraging and inspiring".

The intended meaning is "His stories about working so hard to speak fluent English are encouraging and inspiring".

Is my italic sentence natural?

 

[teechar]

[STRIKE]Someone[/STRIKE] A friend sent me a video about a man who was originally poorly educated but [STRIKE]he worked[/STRIKE] who studied so hard that his English is amazing. I told this friend [STRIKE]who sent me the video[/STRIKE] that I knew about the man because I had watched his [STRIKE]previous[/STRIKE] videos before. I said "His stories are encouraging and inspiring".

The intended meaning is "His stories about working so hard to [STRIKE]speak[/STRIKE] become fluent in English are encouraging and inspiring".

Is my italic sentence natural?

I take it the man told more than one story in the video, right?

 

[Silverobama]

I take it the man told more than one story in the video, right?

Yes. I wonder if my sentences is okay now.

 

[teechar]

Yes. I wonder if my sentences [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] are okay now.

Yes.