alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Is this correct and natural?
I want to buy uncle Gareth's estate and turn all of it to a garden. I owe the piece of land the estate is on. I used to rest under the shade of the trees sprouted from its soil and enjoyed the scent of the flowers that blossomed on them. I feasted on the sweet fruits those trees nurtured and bore and I dipped my toes in the furrows of the land and splashed its pure water on my face. I blew the dandelion clocks and almost all of my wishes I made while doing so came true. I'm planning on rising a tree for each good memory I have from the place.
I want to buy uncle Gareth's estate and turn all of it to a garden. I owe the piece of land the estate is on. I used to rest under the shade of the trees sprouted from its soil and enjoyed the scent of the flowers that blossomed on them. I feasted on the sweet fruits those trees nurtured and bore and I dipped my toes in the furrows of the land and splashed its pure water on my face. I blew the dandelion clocks and almost all of my wishes I made while doing so came true. I'm planning on rising a tree for each good memory I have from the place.