[General] I'd be appreciated if you correct them.

[Silverobama]

Hi.

I read some threads about this sentence structure and I still have a question.

Let's say I send a friend 20 English sentences and ask him to correct for me. But I don't want to take up much of his time, so I say to him "Just give the wrong ones each a cross and a right a tick". I add "I'd be appreciated if you correct them".

I wonder if my sentence is natural. I think it's not.

 

[Rover_KE]

Let's say I send a friend 20 English sentences and ask him to correct them for me. But I don't want to take up much of his time, so I say to him "Just give the wrong ones [STRIKE]each[/STRIKE] a cross and [STRIKE]a right[/STRIKE] the correct ones a tick". I add "I'd [STRIKE]be[/STRIKE] appreciate it if you would correct them".