bartek1988
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Hello,
I'm wondering if the parts in bold are correct. I provided my suggestions below and would be grateful for any help.
A) In 2019, over 70 00 Americans died from drug overdose. In 2020, that number grew to a shocking 93 000 deaths.
I would say 'to a shocking number of 93 000 deaths'
B) This terrifying condition can become the undoing of anyone, especially the ones who do not take it seriously.
I would use 'those'.
C) Before they realise their predicament, they will be stuck in a pattern that they will make for themselves.
I would use the future perfect 'will have made'.
Thanks for your feedback!
I'm wondering if the parts in bold are correct. I provided my suggestions below and would be grateful for any help.
A) In 2019, over 70 00 Americans died from drug overdose. In 2020, that number grew to a shocking 93 000 deaths.
I would say 'to a shocking number of 93 000 deaths'
B) This terrifying condition can become the undoing of anyone, especially the ones who do not take it seriously.
I would use 'those'.
C) Before they realise their predicament, they will be stuck in a pattern that they will make for themselves.
I would use the future perfect 'will have made'.
Thanks for your feedback!