[Grammar] in addition/additionally/furthermore/moreover

[persianfriend71]

Hi...Are these sentences correct and the same?

1. I cannot come with you, I have to go to work. In addition, there is someone I need to see at tow p.m., sorry.
2. I cannot come with you, I have to go to work. additionally, there is someone I need to see at tow p.m., sorry.
3. I cannot come with you, I have to go to work. furthermore, there is someone I need to see at tow p.m., sorry.
4. I cannot come with you, I have to go to work. moreover, there is someone I need to see at tow p.m., sorry.

 

[Yankee]

All four would work. I would prefer #1. but would work better for me without the adverbs. And "two" P.M.

 

[tedmc]

All four are run-on sentences.

 

[probus]

All four are run-on sentences.

And in addition, in 3 and 4 you have started a new sentence without using a capital letter. These little details are necessary if you want to be correct.

 

[Rover_KE]

... and if you want us to keep responding to your threads.

 

[Tarheel]

Perhaps:

I cannot go with you. I have to work late.

 

[emsr2d2]

And you have misspelled "two" in all four sentences.