[Grammar] furthermore/moreover/addition/additionally

[persianfriend71]

Hi. Are these sentences correct and the same ?
1. He works hard,in addition,his father is rich.
2. He works hard,additionally,his father is rich.
3. He works hard,furthermore,his father is rich.
4. He works hard,moreover,his father is rich

 

[teechar]

I don't see the logical connection between those two ideas. In any case, your punctuation is wrong. Start a new sentence after "hard". And don't forget the full stop (period AmE) at the end.
You could simply say "He works hard, and his father is rich".

 

[Charlie Bernstein]

Hi. Are these sentences correct and the same[no space]?
1. He works hard. [space] In addition, [space] his father is rich.
2. He works hard. [space] Additionally, [space] his father is rich.
3. He works hard. [space] Furthermore, [space] his father is rich.
4. He works hard. [space] Moreover,[space] his father is rich.

They all mean the same thing.

Put spaces after periods, commas, and question marks.

Do not put them before periods, commas and question marks.

 

[emsr2d2]

Persianfriend71, this is the third or fourth thread in which I have had to edit post #1 so that it is in the default font and font size. Please stop posting in such small and italicised text. If you must paste text (instead of typing it all out yourself), make sure you paste it as plain text or, after pasting it, highlight it all and click the "Remove Format" button.