In my spare time, I really like reading, and going out jogging

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In my spare time, I really like reading, and going out jogging and walking bristly only if the weather allows me as the weather changes quickly here in Chicago.
 
You definitely don't mean "bristly". Try again.
 
In my spare time, I really like reading, going out jogging and walking briskly only if the weather allows me as the weather changes quickly here in Chicago
 
In my spare time, I really like reading, [STRIKE]going out[/STRIKE] jogging, and walking briskly, but only if the weather allows, [STRIKE]me[/STRIKE] as the weather changes quickly here in Chicago.

Note my corrections above. I have added an Oxford comma so that the readers doesn't see "jogging and walking briskly" as being connected. I have one question though - how does the weather affect your enjoyment of reading?
 
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