"In terms of Americanos, cappuccinos, decaf coffees, iced coffees, and cafe lattes, in 2015, Club Coffee sold more of these coffees than..."

[hardyweineberg]

These sentences are from my essay.

"In terms of Americanos, cappuccinos, decaf coffees, iced coffees, and cafe lattes, in 2015, Club Coffee sold more of these coffees than Espresso Express did: each week, Club Coffee sold about 140 cafe lattes, 110 cappuccinos, 100 Americanos, 75 decaf coffees, and 70 iced coffees, while Espresso Express sold approximately 120 cafe lattes, 60 cappuccinos, 75 Americanos, 50 decaf coffees, and 45 iced coffees."

1) Did I use "in terms of" correctly?
2) Is it wrong to capitalize "Americanos"?
3) Did I use "while" grammatically?

 

[5jj]

1) Did I use "in terms of" correctly?

It would be much simpler to say "Club Coffee sold more americanos, cappuccinos, decaf coffees, iced coffees, and cafe lattes than Espresso Express did".

 

[emsr2d2]

If you really want to use "In terms of", you could add "In terms of coffee sales," to the beginning of 5jj's suggested sentence.

 

[Barque]

2) Is it wrong to capitalize "Americanos"?

I believe both work.