including failed relationships that threatened her self-worth and livelihood

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Hello everyone,

From the book Choose Your Story, Change Your Life by Kindra Hall.

A late-forties, almost fiftysomething woman from Texas, Amy is smart and introspective. She has achieved great things in her life, including running a massively successful entrepreneurial endeavor and holding a top-level leadership role in a corporate education environment, both of which require superior leadership and communication skills. She has also overcome several significant obstacles, including failed relationships that threatened her self-worth and livelihood. In short, Amy is a badass.

Does the bolded phrase mean that only failed relationships, not other significant obstacles mentioned earlier in the sentence, threatened her self-worth and livelihood?
 

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Not necessarily.
 

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To me, yes.
 

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My reading is that the failed relationships were one of the obstacles, amongst others, that threatened her self-worth and livelihood.
 

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If there were a comma after "failed relationships", I would say that they were one of many obstacles that had threatened her self-worth and livelihood. Without the comma, it's two things:

1 - Several significant obstacles
2 - failed relationships that threatened her self-worth and livelihood.
 
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