Increment sanction

[poongodi]

Please help me to draft this Letter.

Dear SIr/Madam,
Sub:Request to sanction increment on completion of graduation

With reference to the above subject I hereby inform you that I have completed my graduation in 2020 and I am eligible for two additional increments for my degree completion on my promotion to clerical cadre. Therefore I request you to sanction the increment for my graduation completion. Kindly do the needful

 

[tedmc]

Please help me to draft this Letter.

Dear SIr/Madam, (better state the name of your superior who is in charge)
Sub:Request [STRIKE]to sanction increment [/STRIKE] for Raise in Salary on [STRIKE]completion of graduation[/STRIKE] Obtaining --- (state the qualification/degree obtained)
[STRIKE]
With reference to the above subject [/STRIKE]I [STRIKE]hereby[/STRIKE] wish to inform you that I [STRIKE]have completed my graduation[/STRIKE] obtained my .....(qualification) in 2020. [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] According to my employment contract (I presume), I am eligible for two [STRIKE]additiona[/STRIKE]l increments for getting my degree [STRIKE]completion[/STRIKE] on my promotion to clerical cadre (what do you mean? What position are you in now and what position do you expect to be promoted to?). Therefore I would like to request you to [STRIKE]sanction the increment for my graduation completion[/STRIKE] make a recommendation for the raise of my salary. [STRIKE]Kindly do the needful.[/STRIKE] I look forward to your kind attention to the matter. Thank you.

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[Tarheel]

Please help me to draft this Letter.

Dear SIr/Madam,
Sub:Request to sanction increment on completion of graduation

With reference to the above subject I hereby inform you that I have completed my graduation in 2020 and I am eligible for two additional increments for my degree completion on my promotion to clerical cadre. Therefore I request you to sanction the increment for my graduation completion. Kindly do the needful

I would say:

I graduated last year (2020).

As for ask vs. request, say I am asking you to .... or I request that you .....

(I'm sure he got it right, but I don't know how Ted figured it out.)

Say:

I am asking for an increase in salary.