Information weighting

[Ellieisrare]

Is this sentence make sense to the English users? 'People tend to give more weight to information arriving first in a situation compared to information arriving subsequently.'
Does it contain any error?

 

[Tarheel]

Does this sentence make sense?

'People tend to give more weight to information arriving first in a situation compared to information arriving subsequently.'

Does it contain any errors?

It looks okay.

 

[probus]

Your sentence is grammatical but unnatural. Try: does this sentence make sense?

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[jutfrank]

Your use of compared is wrong. It should be than.

 

[emsr2d2]

The entire end of the sentence is superfluous.

People tend to give the most weight to [the] information they get first in any situation.