Use "a Goya painting". If you want to use the possessive, you need "is like one of Goya's paintings".
Okay what about this?
After she broke his heart, inside his head became a big dark mess, like one of Goya's paintings.
Okay what about this?
After she broke his heart, inside his head became a big dark mess, like one of Goya's paintings.
Have you considered alternatives to became?
Look up "become" in any decent thesaurus and go from there.
Turned into sounds better to me. As he's disturbed you could use a verb with plenty of motion like churn.
Make it: His mind is a Goya painting.
Saturn devouring his son is both messy and indescribably dark to me. And it's not just the horror of the act- the eyes haunt me. If my head turned into that, I'd be worried.
Sure is! Good point. I mostly think of him as stark. Thanks.Saturn devouring his son is both messy and indescribably dark to me. . . .
So do you think this is okay?
After she broke his heart, his mind has been a Goya paintings, a big dark mess.