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Dear teachers
I start this thread saying that I mean no offense to anyone or any nation. I do respect them all and treat them equally. This text does express my opinion, however, I must ask those who felt insulted to ignore it as I do not intend to discuss politics here.
I just want to know if this text is correct English.
After following headlines of a few widely read online newspapers, it is impossible not to mention the resignation of Egyptian President Hosni Mubarack, from The Telegraph to The New York Times. It can be easily noticed the pressure put forth by USA on the ‘step down’ by Mr. Mubarack. Of course, the Egyptian nation is now celebrating a huge victory; no nation should be ruled by a single man for more than four or eight years, let alone three decades. But it raises more questions: What next? Are Egypt ready to create a new order? Why are USA meddling? Is it because they are the most qualified to advice on what to do next? Egypt had better not think so. Is this going to happen to other countries in the Middle East where there is dictatorship? Unlikely, otherwise, how are USA going to keep their imperialism if there is no fanatic group to sell guns to?
Many thanks
Offroad
I start this thread saying that I mean no offense to anyone or any nation. I do respect them all and treat them equally. This text does express my opinion, however, I must ask those who felt insulted to ignore it as I do not intend to discuss politics here.
I just want to know if this text is correct English.
After following headlines of a few widely read online newspapers, it is impossible not to mention the resignation of Egyptian President Hosni Mubarack, from The Telegraph to The New York Times. It can be easily noticed the pressure put forth by USA on the ‘step down’ by Mr. Mubarack. Of course, the Egyptian nation is now celebrating a huge victory; no nation should be ruled by a single man for more than four or eight years, let alone three decades. But it raises more questions: What next? Are Egypt ready to create a new order? Why are USA meddling? Is it because they are the most qualified to advice on what to do next? Egypt had better not think so. Is this going to happen to other countries in the Middle East where there is dictatorship? Unlikely, otherwise, how are USA going to keep their imperialism if there is no fanatic group to sell guns to?
Many thanks
Offroad
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