Is the below sentence correct ? kindly assist

[nandhusri2007]

“Have attached the process document for your review.
Kindly check and let me know if I would have missed out anything to mention on the report.”

 

[2006]

Welcome!
“I have attached the process document for your review.
Kindly check it and let me know if I [STRIKE]would[/STRIKE] have missed mentioning [STRIKE]out[/STRIKE] anything [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] in the report.”

2006

 

[nandhusri2007]

Thank U;-)
Also assist on the below sentences.
1."There has been no lapse in mainitaining the records for EBS and ECS during the period May'10 - Aug'10"

2.Took initiative on learning ATM Problem Management in a quick time and prepared a process document for the same.

3. There was no lapse on the timely escalation. Issue requires immediate attention have been escalated in a timely manner.

4. Acheived appreciation from Client, ITO and business for innovating a new trend of weekly reports and Meeting minutes.

5. Tukey business had appreciated my service for ECS application.

 

[nandhusri2007]

Can someone please assist on the above post?