[General] Is this sentence correct? Any logical or grammar problems?

[Evildevil4787]

We have choose the word introspection for our group name, but not rumination, as ‘rumination’ is a bit old fashioned, less directed and less people know what ruminate meant in the first place. On the other hand, introspect is more commonly known and more people related to it; Therefore, we have concluded to use the word introspection as our final decision.

 

[Tarheel]

Introspection

Say:

We chose the word Introspection as our group name.

Or:

We chose the word Introspection as the name for our group.

 

[emsr2d2]

We [STRIKE]have choose[/STRIKE] chose/have chosen the word "introspection" for our group name, [STRIKE]but[/STRIKE] not "rumination", as ‘rumination’ is a bit old-fashioned, less [STRIKE]directed[/STRIKE] direct and [STRIKE]less[/STRIKE] fewer people know what "ruminate" [STRIKE]meant[/STRIKE] means. [STRIKE]in the first place.[/STRIKE]

[STRIKE]On the other hand,[/STRIKE] "Introspection" is [STRIKE]more commonly[/STRIKE] better known and more people [STRIKE]related[/STRIKE] relate to it. Therefore, we have concluded [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] that we should/will use the word "introspection". [STRIKE]as our final decision.[/STRIKE]

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

See my corrections above.

 

[teechar]

Is this sentence correct? Any logical or grammar problems?

Hello and welcome.
First, please correct the info on your profile page, and post below to let us know you've done that.
Second, what kind of group are you talking about?

 

[Tarheel]

Evildevil, I'm curious about something. How did it come down to being a choice between "introspection" and "rumination"?