it was so delicious that I wolfed it down in a few seconds

[alpacinou]

Hello

Is it correct and natural to say something like this?

Last night I went to a pizza place near my class. The pizza was so delicious that I wolfed it down in a few seconds.

If this does not work, how else can I convey that the pizza was great and I ate it quickly?

 

[alpacinou]

Also, is this correct?

There were a bunch of cookies on the table, he attacked a wolfed down all of them

 

[GoesStation]

Also, is this correct?

There were a bunch of cookies on the table, he attacked and wolfed them all down. [STRIKE]all of them[/STRIKE]

My version is more natural.

 

[GoesStation]

Last night I went to a pizza place near my class. The pizza was so delicious that I wolfed it down in a few seconds.

That's fine.

 

[jutfrank]

There were a bunch of cookies on the table, he attacked and wolfed them all down. all of them

My version is more natural.

You apparently considered the comma splice justified there, GoesStation. Can you say why?

 

[GoesStation]

You apparently considered the comma splice justified there, GoesStation. Can you say why?

Um, because I hadn't had my coffee yet and it escaped my notice? It's not justified.

 

[emsr2d2]

The pizza was so delicious that I wolfed it down in a few seconds.

I think that, if you can eat a whole pizza in a few seconds, you should go for a world record! ;-)

Saying "I wolfed it down" suffices. That means you ate it very quickly.