Jasmine could not see opposite people

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Is this correct and natural?

Jasmine could not see opposite people for too long. She didn't fear them. She feared that her eyes would give her away. That people could see the darkness in her heart seeping through her eyes.
 
No. What on earth are "opposite people"?
 
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I think the confusion is that you said "see opposite" instead of "sit opposite." The rest is fine.
 
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