alpacinou
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- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
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- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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John couldn't stop thinking about her. Later that day, during a meeting at work, her image kept seeping into his mind. He realized he couldn't focus as she encroached on his thoughts. It wasn't until the middle of the night when he realized he had developed deep feelings for her. She visited him in his dreams, talking to him whenever he managed to drift off into fitful sleep. She had truly penetrated every layer of his consciousness.
John couldn't stop thinking about her. Later that day, during a meeting at work, her image kept seeping into his mind. He realized he couldn't focus as she encroached on his thoughts. It wasn't until the middle of the night when he realized he had developed deep feelings for her. She visited him in his dreams, talking to him whenever he managed to drift off into fitful sleep. She had truly penetrated every layer of his consciousness.
