[Grammar] Kindergarten graduation speech

[84volvo]

Hi, my daughter is graduating from her kindergarten next month. Following is her speech for the graduation ceremony. Could you please see if there are some grammatical errors?
Thank you in advance.

[FONT=맑은 고딕]My dear friends and my teachers. It seems like it was only yesterday when we all met together here at XXXX School. But, many years have passed and I realize that it is time for us to say goodbye to each other. [/FONT]
[FONT=맑은 고딕]Looking back the time, we spent together, I have good memories of learning English, performing musicals, going to field trips, and many other fun activities we did together. I will never forget the great time we had at XXXX School.[/FONT]
[FONT=맑은 고딕] [/FONT]
[FONT=맑은 고딕]Soon I will be a 1[SUP]st[/SUP] grade student, and I am so excited about it. On behalf of all XXXX graduates, I would like to say,” Thank you” to our parents and teachers for giving us this wonderful opportunity in studying here at XXXX School.[/FONT]
[FONT=맑은 고딕] [/FONT]
[FONT=맑은 고딕]Thank you.[/FONT]

 

[tedmc]

My dear friends and [STRIKE]my[/STRIKE] teachers, It seems like [STRIKE]it was[/STRIKE] only yesterday [STRIKE]when[/STRIKE] that we all first met [STRIKE]together[/STRIKE] here at XXXX School. But, many years have passed since and I realize that it is time for us to say goodbye to each other.
Looking back at the time we spent together, I have good (fond) memories of learning English, performing musicals, going to field trips, and many other fun activities we did together. I will never forget the great time we have had at XXXX School.

Soon I will be a 1[SUP]st[/SUP] grade student, and I am so excited about it. On behalf of all XXXX graduates, I would like to say,” Thank you” to our parents and teachers for giving us this wonderful opportunity [STRIKE]in [/STRIKE] to study[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] here at XXXX School.

not a teacher

 

[84volvo]

Thank you, tedmc.

 

[emsr2d2]

Wow, your 4-year-old daughter is giving a speech in a non-native tongue! That is very impressive!

 

[84volvo]

Thank you, emsr2d2. She's just turned 6 last month, and she has been enjoying learning English so much for the past 3 years.

 

[enity234]

The speech is really impressive dear. I will teach my kid also to write down such a wonderful speech for his graduation speech. I am sure you guys will help me also in that. I will share the speech here with you in just few days.

 

[MikeNewYork]

Is kindergarten really many years in that school?