[General] No one has asked me yet...(32 words)

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The following short paragraph was a reply to Kris. Kris asked me to help him to see if there's a Japanese teacher in my friend list, so I posted something that all my friends can see online. However, no one has asked me anything about it. Kris' company was looking for a Japanese teacher. Please help me with the following sentences:

No one has asked me anything about the job vacancy about teaching Japanese in your company. We'll see if there's anyone wants to do it. If there's one, I'll let you know.

Besides making the sentence natural. I also wonder if the second sentence is enough. I think the third and fourth are redundant, but I add them because there are explaining something.
 

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The following short paragraph was a reply to Kris. Kris asked me to help him to see if there's a Japanese teacher in my friend list, so I posted something that all my friends can see online. However, no one has asked me anything about it. Kris's company was looking for a Japanese teacher. Please help me with the following sentences:

No one has asked me anything about the job vacancy about teaching Japanese in your company. We'll see if there's anyone wants to do it. If there's one, I'll let you know.
No one has contacted me yet about the job vacancy for a Japanese teacher at your company. If anyone does, I'll let you know.

Besides [STRIKE]making[/STRIKE] wanting to make the sentence natural, I also wonder if the second sentence is enough. I think the third and fourth are redundant, but I added them because [STRIKE]there[/STRIKE] they are explaining something.

See above. I have written my version of your sentences underneath yours, as changing the individual words would have looked a bit confusing.
 

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And I'd make the possessive of Kris Kris's, because the second S is pronounced separately: krissiz
 

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